In my dream, it's a beautiful summer's day. The sun warms us in the palm of its hand. Snatches of birdsong dance among the tree-tops, fractured by branches, here and there a single pure note suspended in the morning air, clear as a sunbeam.
The six of us are wandering down a forest path, not certain where it leads. We have never been this way before - it is an adventure. The whole scene could have been painted by Pisarro. Everywhere we look the greenery assaults us, reaches out her arms to us like a speechless young girl. Every extended branch is both an invitation and a cry for help. Under our feet the heather smells new, but the path we are walking on is already well-trodden. It is a public holiday today, and many others are already ahead of us.
After many hours of walking, we come to a massive clearing, a great oval space, ringed with ancient trees. This is where all the other picnicers have gathered, whole families scattered along the periphery of the clearing, in the cool shade of the forest's edge. Somewhere a radio is playing Once upon a summertime. Off on the far side we see a great tree like a barely controlled explosion, its leaves like tiny flames. And underneath it, a single park bench, its back turned to the clearing, looking away into the invisible distance.
Walking towards this tree, we finally see the river. It's right there, just beyond the trees, skirting the edge of this clearing and then turning in a great curve to flow on south. We climb up a low rise and stare at it. The water is brilliant here, clear and unpolluted so you can see right down to the shallow bottom, tinted green like a bottle of lemonade. An old stone bridge, half in ruins, leaps desperately across the river. A row of battered rocks, trail their way down to the water in descending order, looking for all the world like a portrait of the evolution of stone. The sun is very hot now, and beside it, the river seems like a promise of infinite, lazy coolness.
I stand on the rise staring at it, wondering what lies beyond that next bend, trying to ignore the excited cries of children drifting up from where they are playing, just on the edge of my sight. An unmanned boat drifts by, trailing a lenth of broken rope behind it. No one seems to pay it any attention. I turn to my companions, wanting to point it out to them, but they are down in the clearing now, playing board games.
All the beauty in the world is passing helplessly by me. And I am alone.
Sunday, 20 July 2008
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u froze it here!
dint u?
very nice use of imagery...i could almost visualize the place/
loved the last line
All the beauty in the world is passing helplessly by me. And I am alone.
very beautiful
hey ho,...am tagin u ..:). keep up the gud work...gr8 to find a fellow HR soul here..;)
Summer time..!Reading your post makes me miss summer.It is pouring cats and dogs out here..Brilliant post!
very beautifully worded..and what I appreciate here is the complete absence of senselessly heavy words...good job!!:)
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@gunj
this kind of stuck with me :)
@ ranjana
thank you
@queen
thank you and nice to meet a HR soul :)
@Sunny daffodil
thank you
@ scribblers inc
thanks dude and i kind of dont like the heavy words since i dont know many :P
hmmm....that ws awsome :D
but it had a tinge of alonesness all through...why? celebrate da :D
cheers!
Beautiful entry. = )
beautifully written :))
You write very well. Good imagery, and good use of symbolism :)
Hey!! ever tried finding meaning to your dreams... google it :)
Nicely written...
That was heartfelt! :)
And I'm definitely gonna be coming back here more often! Keep up the good work! :)
Perfectly written, hope your well ;-)
I was there... right there with you. Your imagery was that beautiful!
Hi ,
I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Sneak Peek’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
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This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
Gorgeously written! Its like a looking at those beautiful pictures behind postcards! =)
And IMO its best enjoyed alone!
@endevourme
thanks dude..but nope not lonely and all..but somethings are best enjoyed alone :)
@shrutilya,trinna,lekhni
thank you and thanks for dropping by
@Happyz
will do..
@anindita
thank you and keep visiting :)
@stacey
thank you ..and me doing great :)
@macadamia
hehe..thanks ..
@nayantara
thank you ..and you are absolutely right..some things are best enjoyed alone :)eg:- chocolate brownie and icecream :))
"Alone but not lonely" Isn't it? Atleast i felt so.
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